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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Eventually the sliding images of emotion
    Cross over
    As the threshold teeters on its brink of knowing
    One step
    Upon the present now

    Fibonacci scales cascading inward
    Where is the connection

    The cumulative rhythms
    Counter point on the equilibrium

    Slow to fluid corporeal intention
    Loses the two mind bond
    Becoming one

    And so reaching to the moment
    Acceleration touches

    Point
    Of
    Burst




    Submitted on 2010-01-30 18:25:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      stars burst.....yes they do.... and balloons burst.... and more like bubbles and such, and what not, and like the technical angle with sequential suggestion in the upper mid range to lead down into an aether at the settled bottom very imaginary,,, get it...imaginary....
    but anyhow awesome, good view
    | Posted on 2010-01-30 00:00:00 | by leocrates | [ Reply to This ]
      stars burst.....yes they do.... and balloons burst.... and more like bubbles and such, and what not, and like the technical angle with sequential suggestion in the upper mid range to lead down into an aether at the settled bottom very imaginary,,, get it...imaginary....
    but anyhow awesome, good view
    | Posted on 2010-01-30 00:00:00 | by leocrates | [ Reply to This ]


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