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    dots Submission Name: deliver you to the devildots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 55
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    dotsdeliver you to the devildots
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    in a world full of predators i see your prey and i pray that today wont be the last time i say that i love you i need you i haunt you i hunt you and when predators prey on predators i slaughter you murder you torture you and deliver you for the devils stew




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