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    dots Submission Name: Cloisters Parchmentdots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 273
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsCloisters Parchmentdots

    It was written in the biospheric tendrils
    Akashic records
    Of before the ending days would come
    Before the final work was done
    We would meet again
    And of some comfort be reminded

    I can still see on Sanskrit
    The ancient kept promise
    We placed forever on its parchment
    And sealed away
    We knew then, life had no barrier of time
    And love would always transcend

    Through the dust of ages
    Lives uncounted
    Remember then your guardian
    Your lover
    And your friend
    The spirit was, of you, in the mother Earth
    And to the Lion was wedded then

    It is a secret, yet to be revealed
    Of written records, remembered
    It was in a calico of white dipladenia
    Where we beheld the sun
    Your bridal gown upon the sands
    In Egypt where our tryst was made

    To meet again

    Far beyond the seas
    Where disheveled hand could not reach
    And though we have lived amongst its illusions
    We have not fallen to its sickness
    It was a battle, written to the purpose of soul
    A sacrifice we made, in the fullness and clarity of love

    Timeless time is ending now my love
    And upon the parchment the promise made
    Was our destiny to keep
    We shall both stand or fall, by a warrior’s code
    But always rise above the defeat
    Always in Eternity we meet

    We are one, and we win, always by the sacred law of The Universe

    And teach the world to love again

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