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    Author: JonInk
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 6/11/8
    Words: 211
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       In becoming a long lost poet...


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    “Poetics"
    The stripes of bright colours,
    It became art.
    The ripples of beauty,
    It became love.
    The quotes of the truth,
    It became life.
    The power of words,
    It became poems.
    The original,
    It became me.






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