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    dots Submission Name: Minedots
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    Author: alyssafrench16
    ASL Info:    17/f/inherroomville
    Elite Ratio:    1.95 - 8/22/19
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 413
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 440



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    dotsMinedots
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    My life's not a fairytale,
    there's things that I can't repeat,
    but deep down I have the strength,
    and soon I'll make my own fate

    Coiled up on the ground,
    fears keep me surrounded,
    but I'll find a way,
    and create my own little place

    Keep hope alive,
    and love will find,
    each heartbeat lasts,
    another seconds mine.




    Submitted on 2010-02-01 21:49:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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