Miracle by alyssafrench16

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Author:	alyssafrench16
ASL Info:	17/f/inherroomville
Elite Ratio:	1.95 - 8/22/19
Words:	62

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	587
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	399

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Miracle

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Miracle...

the plane went down,
99 dead, a baby survived.
What do we call that?

Miracle....

the bus crashed,
20 survived, one died.
What do we call that?

Miracle....

the cross stood tall,
a savior one for all.
what do we call that?

A Miracle.

Submitted on 2010-02-01 21:58:59 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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i rly like it, flows nicely and easily understood...oh and btw i like ur pic hehe
| Posted on 2010-02-02 00:00:00 | by Alilia | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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It means a lot to them, as it does to you.