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    dots Submission Name: Doki Doki!! dots
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    Author: Xiallia
    ASL Info:    17-F-Missing Osaka[IL]
    Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 3/23/32
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Romance
    Total Views: 469
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1103



    Description:
       A song xDD


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    dotsDoki Doki!! dots
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    There's a small thump in my chest. You're the cause of it!


    Waah~ It's so embarrasing to feel.
    What's this feeling I feel?

    Doki Doki is what my heart says.
    Nyaa~! It feels great.
    Wave my wand I get rose for you.
    But no! They're wilted [T-T]

    Let me fall into your arms and my heart goes Doki Doki!
    To the stars we will fly My love will never end!

    Doki Doki, Doki
    Doki Doki, Doki
    Whheee

    Let me fall into your arms and my heart goes bump bump
    There's no worries in your head
    I feel your heart~
    Doki Doki.

    When I cry you're always there
    Lending a Comfort hand
    Touch me with those loving lips
    Let me fly into the sky

    There's no ever feeling sad
    I'm not ever depressed
    Come with me.
    A Adventure is what we'll do

    Into your arms I will try
    To the Stars we will fly
    My love won't end
    Doki Doki~!




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    ||| Comments |||
      You are so lucky. With me, it means I forgot to take my pills.

    I hope you stay with your lover so long that you both forget to take your pills together.

    Mine dumped me and got a guy who remembers his pills.
    | Posted on 2010-03-28 00:00:00 | by lakesblue | [ Reply to This ]
      This is strange? I find myself fascinated by certain lines yet repulsed by others. But I will acknowledge that this is great, superb, and I have to hear it be sung one of these days.
    | Posted on 2010-02-04 00:00:00 | by Dark Dann | [ Reply to This ]
      I see perfect lyrics for a Japanese electronica song.
    It's very cute,I must admitt.
    Love your pic,btw.

    Have a nice day. =]
    | Posted on 2010-02-02 00:00:00 | by LRRolins | [ Reply to This ]


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