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    Author: GhiHaD
    ASL Info:    22/Male/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 46/64/24
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWordsdots
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    Unquestionable feats of strength
    Lifting knowledge into oneself
    Entwining intelligence within thought

    Space questions apart from answers
    To reveal reasons of occurance
    We spare our emotions of anger and tormet

    Relaxing everything into fluid motions
    Open the cover of a book unread
    Delve into the mystery and intrigue

    "what are these words?"

    Unfamiliar
    A story to be told
    Words to be sold




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