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    dots Submission Name: Unfinished Poem/Song...?dots
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    Author: xAngeliquex
    ASL Info:    15/Female/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 13/13/29
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 16
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 320



    Description:
       Note: this will never be finished. I lost my train of thought while writing it.


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    dotsUnfinished Poem/Song...?dots
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    Singing in hopes of recognizing my own voice,

    Not crying or fighting because I don't have a choice.

    There's no longer ways to express how I feel.

    Smiling because there's no time to cry...

    No time, no time.

    Swirling through my mind




    Submitted on 2010-02-03 15:09:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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