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    dots Submission Name: New Trend[Poem/Lyrics]dots

    Author: xAngeliquex
    ASL Info:    15/Female/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 14/14/30
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       BTW: Desposition isn't a word, as far as I know. Thus randomly screaming it might make one sound weird. Which is intended in this.

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    dotsNew Trend[Poem/Lyrics]dots

    As if it were rehearsed, my life takes a turn for the worst.

    I'm in a position, to scream "desposition!"

    Losing my grip but I knew it would be like this!

    Not holding myself back let the tears fucking roll,

    I'm walking by death as I pay the toll

    Can't take one breath

    Can't escape from this place

    I just want to hold hands...

    With this sweet embrace.

    Embrace of death makes me feel alone

    But it's better than this place--I don't have a home.

    I tried to fight but it hit me in the end

    Screaming at you seems to be a new trend

    Submitted on 2010-02-03 15:13:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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