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    dots Submission Name: Sex Like Thisdots
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    Author: xAngeliquex
    ASL Info:    15/Female/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 14/14/30
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
    Total Views: 709
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 879



    Description:
       This writing along with several recent others are so raw with emotions and feelings that I can not distinguish whether or not they are poems or lyrics.

    I'm not quite sure who I wrote this poem to...or why.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSex Like Thisdots
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    Pushing back and screaming, man these tears cease streaming.

    Just when I think it's all planned out
    It takes another direction

    I'm putting my pain into this bliss

    Because sex like this makes me want to kiss..

    Those lips of yours let me whisper something entirely new...
    Ah, sweet serenity of my body

    Our hearts beating in sync
    This is truly unique

    Sex like this makes my heart think twice
    Before it beats I take a breath out of line

    Could you understand,
    Baby why do I keep coming...?

    COMING BACK FOR MORE!

    Yeah I'm tasting something bitter
    but isn't victory

    'Cause sex like this could mean so much to me
    Yeah sex like this makes me rethink misery




    Submitted on 2010-02-03 15:20:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      O_O M'kay . . . Intresting topic . . Intresting wording. I can't relate, never had sex in my life . . >_> Umm, yeah . . Akward . . . But, I think it's good . . >_> <_< O_p
    | Posted on 2010-02-04 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]


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