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    dots Submission Name: The Written Word.dots

    Author: dismal_s child
    ASL Info:    19/F/On A Carousel
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 451/419/172
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Rant/Comedy
    Total Views: 697
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 638

       Hehe. Boreddddd.

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    dotsThe Written Word.dots

    What do you want me to say?
    That I'm terribly sad?
    or am I suposed to describe a leaf?
    Do I tell you about waves,
    dolphins and seaweed?
    Do I write about my angst?
    With overused clichés.
    Whine about the government?
    About school or work?
    Should I rhyme that with jerk?

    And write a "u" for y-o-u.
    or emphasise my point with a :(

    And everyone out in Cyber-land,
    will pat me on the back, and compliment my flow. They'll tell me I write "awesomeeeeeee",
    with "great imagry".

    Submitted on 2010-02-03 18:57:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Sweet. I'm not much of a rap fan, but there is a song by some rapper (maybe Jay-Z) that pretty much states anything he puts on an album will make millions and he can laugh to the bank. H did it, half the song is gibberish and it made millions. I might be off, but I got this out of that. Now for the comment you really want:

    "awesomeeeeeee :) OMG ROFL ;) best writ eva!!!!! LOVED IT and tha imagry is so reel it specks to me, LOL!!!"

    There u go. Great flow... yo.

    | Posted on 2010-02-05 00:00:00 | by Nicholas Lala | [ Reply to This ]

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