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    dots Submission Name: riddles of spacedots
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    Author: Cure
    ASL Info:    24/M/BakerCity, Or
    Elite Ratio:    4.69 - 26/23/15
    Words: 211
    Class/Type: Riddle/
    Total Views: 876
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       lol just a nice little bit of nonsense for ya. have fun i know i did.
    -lol, i dont really like this its just some weird thoughts but maybe you'll find it as a funny way to approach this idea


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    dots riddles of spacedots
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    when an unstopable force meats an unmovable object
    what can happen?; do they cancel each other out leaving nothingness?, a realy big bang causing the two essences to shared and scatter creating a place resembling that of a cosmic melting pot just waiting for something to happen?, or do they both remain loyal to their definations and continue to 'push' and 'resist' the entitie in front of them. what then? what happends at the point of contact . what is that which is within this little window of something else? - the vibrations of existance?




    Awnser: if the metaphysical object were to be of such a subtance it be shapless and the metaphysical force be beyond form.
    then the force will transcend through the object refracting off its forms sending glimers of shapes and differences of all dimensions.
    the two entities are bolth individual and yet plural all while being neither.

    what is space?...



    now the real riddle which is the force; mind?
    and which is the object; matter? i like to think the opposite but agreeing with me may lead to you being wrong and upsidedown....





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      I think I agree the mind is the object for as humans it's one of the only things we can truly own and know . Then again I could wish it was the unstoppable force when I consider the ramifications of manifest destiny . I know what a hopeless romantic but what can I say ? It could truly be nice if that was the functional equation .

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2010-10-21 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      I read somewhere that the only people that will ever know what happens when an unstoppable force meets an imovable object are Chuck Norris and Mr. T.
    I don't know the answer as I am neither but I did enjoy the read. Cheers!
    | Posted on 2010-02-09 00:00:00 | by StarAcabar | [ Reply to This ]


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