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    dots Submission Name: Me Againdots
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    Author: DAlin
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 82/137/75
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
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    dotsMe Againdots
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    It was such a lonely rainy night
    Tears in my eyes,
    And I realized, that I
    Need another dream.

    I wanna follow my own way
    I will not listen when you tell me to stay
    My life no longer needs
    No longer needs you there.

    I never said no
    I never said no
    I`m just me again

    I feel like I can touch the sky
    I feel so free, please don`t ask me why
    My soul is shining
    Shining like a star

    My will to carrie on will grow
    `cause I found someone who can make me glow
    Like the sun
    Baby like the sun.

    Beautiful smile
    Welcome in my life
    Beautiful love
    For me again
    Sent from above.

    I never said no
    I never said no
    I`m just me again.






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