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    dots Submission Name: The Enlightenmentdots
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    Author: leocrates
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 103/34/38
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       just some ranting on being good...


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    dotsThe Enlightenmentdots
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    Once i thought i was enlightened,,,

    Some men think of enlightenment as a thing
    some think of enlightenment as a process
    or an attainable thing...
    some consider it tangible...

    if you look in your heart and it is black,
    like the night sky, like coal, like the charred ash of death, you need enlightenment

    you cannot buy enlightenment
    but you can be enlightened and use that enlightenment to destroy the darkness that plagues you by shining the light of the enlightenment...

    enlightenment is not a weapon, it is an idea...
    the idea is that the world is a prison, with the motto that the truth shall set you free...

    enlightenment is like a compass that can show you a way to find truth... and then you can use truth to free yourself but you need to know what chains you, where the lock is and which key to use...




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