The world’s incredible smoothness
lulls me. The moon is gone. The child
and her ocean are silent. Still.
Asleep, so desperately asleep.
The moon is gone and it is like forgetting
the face of a loved one
who hated you.
Without a ripple, the ocean secedes.
The mountain grows and grows and the snow
takes away. It buries the jade stars. It buries
the lost night sky, the wandering emptiness.
It buries the child, and she sleeps on. The world
is cold midnight silk.
I totally love the time-lapse effect you used here. I also like to use camera effects in my work. My own poem "Node exploding" comes to mind, where I used a 4 step zoom in the middle of it. Actually the whole poem revolves around that effect. Maybe you can read it. I don't know if you'll like it though, it's kinda brutal...