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    Author: leocrates
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 103/34/38
    Words: 333
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
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    I am the boy who'se world was ruined once by religion and ruined again by politics, and ruined a third time by my own family
    there is no home for me
    i hate this world and all of its idiocy
    i hate this world and am thinking about suicide...
    maybe a noose, maybe overdose, maybe i buy a gun and clean out my ears...
    not like anyone is in my life...
    not like my funeral would have more than immediate family, who i hereby resolve to refuse...i have no family....
    i once had a brother who traded me for sex...
    i once had a sister who was an angel
    my brother wanted to turn her into a whore...
    and if he did it was rape...
    i once had a mother who said she loves me, but only is willing to dump guilt, shame, and fault on me
    i once had a father, but he was a wuss who wouldn't stand up for his own beliefs if he was told all he has to do is sin...
    and on the day i die thank god my soul will be released, and by released i men no more, dead, zero zilch, nada, zip the great void...
    no after life for me please... all of the people i could meet there are heartless bastards who would deny me again... and anyway there is no soul... it is just the idea that a person can find new life in life, without having to die, but that wouldn't be religion and politics and it wouldn't be science because science would be the study of the phenomenton
    so to all the lost souls, the agonizing over what others make for people to agonize of good luck
    i wish no life after life... i don't believe in heaven, and i won't even think that hell is just the garbage disposal, or trash compactor, i would rather not exist than spend one more minute on earth...




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      I once had a mother who blames me and my father and my sister for her failure at life, i once had a father who beat and raped and hurt and yelled and [censored]ed up his life and the lives of his children, i once had a sister who molested myself for years upon years (i still have her, she is great, but the hurts still there, the pain, i love my sister i have forgiven)
    I Once had a boy, who loved and cared (and hurt and fought) With me, and i still have him, to hold and cry with, to love and (hopfully) die with.

    I was once like you, hopeless and longing for death (and still am) and yes the world is idiotic and pointless, but stick around, things could get better.. Maybe.

    If not, [censored] your family off, and move to Tahiti..

    Nice poem, try fixing some spelling mistakes (like im sure there are in my comment) and some grammar.
    Thank you for sharing.

    Ween.
    | Posted on 2010-02-08 00:00:00 | by Weenus | [ Reply to This ]


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