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    dots Submission Name: Reversing Polarity 3dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 271
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsReversing Polarity 3dots
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    Don’t you realise
    You are responsible for
    The next progression of universal evolution
    In which the focal point, of human love
    Is a new perspective
    Of emotional force

    This, and you, are something new

    For millennia now the universal being
    Has been expanding ( exploding ) within itself
    But in the breathing “ out ” of Brahma
    So comes the time of breathing “ in ”
    In the twilight moment of standing still
    All begins again

    This, and you, are something new

    Every energy of creation now expanding
    Begins contracting
    Every energy of creation now contracting
    Begins expanding
    Fundamental to the law of action
    Consciousness in the reaction

    This, and you, are something new

    The coincidences blossom into meaning
    The age of end
    The age of beginning
    And everything is reversing
    Its polarity

    Love, the human perspective universal of
    Is hinged upon the verge
    Of expansion into the infinite
    Already awakening, do you see yourself
    Already shifting
    Reversing your polarity

    This, and you, are something new

    Outward goes, from the in
    The revelation explodes within
    The connection through atoms
    As you realise
    God, the universal being
    Is everywhere, inside everything

    And your perception
    The message you carry
    Expands outward to touch creation
    In which the focal point, of human love
    Is a new perspective
    Of emotional force

    This, and you, are something new

    The beauty you have gathered throughout lifetimes
    Is astounding in its concept
    In its understanding
    The emotional force of your sacred heart
    Awareness, consciousness
    To the perfection of its form





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    ||| Comments |||
      Very George Harrison....
    I liked but felt because of my skew at the moment
    it had too lofty an ambition
    like tring to get a bird to try and pick up a rock with its wing to throw it....
    very good attempt though there really are sides that kind of match between Hinduism pre-Gautama and Modern America....
    | Posted on 2010-02-07 00:00:00 | by leocrates | [ Reply to This ]


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