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    dots Submission Name: sunrise effigy dots
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    Author: leocrates
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 103/34/38
    Words: 365
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       working here on an intermingling of social political soap boxing, and a thematic death of the west....


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    dotssunrise effigy dots
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    the vacancy in our eyes lets our silence fill with other noise and nothing voices.
    conversation is always in strange growing ways, multiplicity, absoluteness, meaningless values let out as harvest belts and fears in trite and tiny minded bodies of people.
    make me alone,
    alone, alone, make me the will
    the happened the maker, away from impressed babbling television jockeys and pornographers,
    it is either pure narcissism or shameless expressionist
    overly critical under communicated commercial sell outs
    being in the way of real things and fun
    unappreciative eyes and no sense of hearing more than dumb miming of what lips blur into from each optical twist of skull testicles and neuro-glandular dope organ
    as judicial verses for sleep go
    forget them

    give me an answer for orange and mauve sherbet skies in the morning
    a tool of thumbs material
    a hand for gods cock
    donít sell out or die without knowing what it is to stand up
    running isnít first of course
    or what corrupt fascists in the mainlined politics on the right
    and the omitted left by conservative closet case jackasses
    an abandoned and fungal religious landscape
    out for the numb struck void of after life
    criminal is only who is victim
    always in the way is the victim
    terrorists and football Christianity overpaid half fame and pretty boys
    and pretty girls
    and American borders are really there to keep what ever is in
    in
    and everyone else thinks thatís great
    only places where there are no borders think of keeping others out

    money doesnít work post industry
    just like print is endangered because its easier to pretend to understand empathetically
    with sex than it is to be literate and pay attention
    because it should be free
    and post industry is the same as pre-industry without matching luxury
    or traditions of cultural division between generations
    the market place isnít a house
    a china shop is no place for a bull
    oh give me a home where the buffalo roam
    ever since black and white photographs killed them while buying up the last west






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