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    dots Submission Name: Nothing Left.dots
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    Author: misschalloner
    ASL Info:    24.F.CA
    Elite Ratio:    6.28 - 45/42/24
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Rant/I am dead inside
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    dotsNothing Left.dots
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    Ah, poetry..
    What's the point? Psh. Oh how therapeutic it is! Oh how it eases the mind, the soul... Why isn't it working now?! Secretly, I know why. Can I face it? NO. I am so many regrets... Regrets? Yes and no. What am I supposed to do about them? Absolutely nothing. I am cursed with them for the rest of my life.
    Oh dear Lord.
    I have not been in this much turmoil in so damn long. This is not who I am; this is NOT who I want to be... Or is this who I am?? Noo. Oh God please no....
    Reverting back would be sooooo easy.... Sooooo smooth.....

    NO! I have come so far...
    It does NOT feel like it.
    Not at all.
    I have to hold strong, keep believing. Psh..... Really?
    I can never make up my mind. Why do I feel this way???? I am so conflicted!

    Everybody just....
    Ignore me.
    Pretend I don't exist.
    ....even if I beg.

    I am not worth it.




    Submitted on 2010-02-07 18:57:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      :) I certainly feel this one! Maybe we're really the 'normal' ones and these people turned on by vibrating razors and disposable douches... well, maybe they're just in our way.

    And I certainly like to write what I feel, whether it is 'worthy' of anyone else or not... altho, some might try to convince me I'm supposed to write for others.... Pshhhh, as you would say.

    I hope you feel better soon... anything I can say or destroy that might help? :)
    | Posted on 2010-02-09 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      I believe that you're first few lines are completely irrelevant to the rest of the poem. Or... uh... whatever this is. You first discuss poetry, and then you go on to say how you've come so far, and you write of what type of person you are (or rather, who you aren't.) I believe that if you're going to submit something, you must be consistent on what you're trying to say.
    Or maybe I'm misunderstanding?
    And then the last lines. They seem meaningful- and sort of ironic- for by submitting something, the public is to click and read it, and yet you tell them, at the very end, to ignore you. I see this as sort of comedic.
    I guess it was fine, overall.
    | Posted on 2010-02-08 00:00:00 | by AshKetchumLuv | [ Reply to This ]
      This, an experience where all seems out of focus.
    A time where being alone is comforting, damning.
    Sometimes we need to know there is an ending
    so we can relax and refocus our attention thus.

    The therapeutic aspect comes only from release,
    for when we truly release that which is a cancer
    we heal.

    I too have known the aspects of being alone.
    Alone in perception and alone in feeling.
    To escape this is to use it as a strength and not a weakness.
    See it as an aspect of being unique, even in pain.
    I pray that soon you will learn what it is to feel.
    Again.

    Hope you feel better soon.
    | Posted on 2010-02-08 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]


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