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    dots Submission Name: A Journey From Withindots
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    Author: Kersofmia
    ASL Info:    23/m/NY
    Elite Ratio:    5.48 - 116/89/50
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsA Journey From Withindots
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    I see a man all alone
    but still he smiles
    where he lays his head is home
    but that changes all the while

    This man has not lost his mind
    for adaptation happens from within
    and if you watch him, what you will find
    that he is a king among men

    So how would you define isolation?
    Empty yearning for another?
    For I believe its a destination
    That when reached gives more than a lover

    One can not have anything to give
    if not happy in solitude
    because you take from those who live
    and all those who surround you

    Once this journey has been met
    You can give to who you care for
    And be much more than contempt
    Loving life like never before...




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