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    dots Submission Name: Y'know Whatdots
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    Author: CynicalxDreamer
    ASL Info:    31/m/7th Level of Hell
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 40/100/64
    Words: 359
    Class/Type: Misc/Angry
    Total Views: 965
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2417



    Description:
       This is another rant piece. I still have my other pieces I like to write but as of late, its been more me wanting to express what I think rather then just what I feel. So these are my thoughts once more, likely sounding as mad as the words on page.


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    dotsY'know Whatdots
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    You know what annoys me?
    Hearing someone try to bullshit
    About something they know nothing about
    When you can see the lies
    Choke in their throat
    And they're eyes dart for escape routes
    Because they keep digging
    Their ass into a verbal grave
    That's when I just wait
    To bury them with their mound of ignorance

    You know what chafes my pale ass?
    It's hearing one more person
    Say we've achieved some pinnacle of humanity
    Because our President is 'black'
    Never mind that a skin tone doesn't divine
    Their plan, their background, their political agenda
    It's just a symbol over a package
    Trying to be sold as -change-
    Yet all I'm really getting
    Is the same familiar shit in new wrapping

    You wanna know what makes my brain cells die?
    When we yell for diversity
    But boo and hiss when it's non-PC
    How we'll laugh at jokes with our friends
    But suddenly you're 'not that guy'
    When someone confronts you on your words
    Yet it's cool to talk trash
    In bathroom stalls
    You want the hate to stop?
    Then flush that crap before you walk out

    You know what gets under my skin?
    The ones who think they can silence others
    By yelling insults like faggot...Nazi...honky...nigger
    That the best way to be right
    Is to make sure they're shouting offensives
    And cutting others with explicitives
    When the real world becomes a net forum
    Filled with flamers, followers, and trolls
    It's a shame that in this life
    You don't have a ban function, only -ignore-

    You know what I hate?
    That I'm categorized and stereotyped
    That my life and who I am
    Is perceived by skin tone, income, gender, sexuality, what I look like
    That no matter what I say or do
    I am defined by what you think I am
    I say fuck your eyes, fuck your judgment
    Reality is not defined by just your paradigm
    Its a fragmented jumble of chaos still forming itself
    Just like most of our lives
    So before you act like you know all about me
    Make sure when you look in the mirror
    You know the face there




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