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    dots Submission Name: When I was four...dots
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    Author: AshKetchumLuv
    ASL Info:    17/Ladeh/Nonyabeezwax
    Elite Ratio:    6.63 - 14/15/12
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Haiku/
    Total Views: 605
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    Description:
       Based on a true story.


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    dotsWhen I was four...dots
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    It is my birthday.
    Today, I am turning four.
    I don't want to sleep.


    It is very late.
    Out of bed, turning corner.
    There is my mommy.


    She is playing cards.
    The pretty cards with faeries.
    I go pick one up.


    She is so angry.
    Mommy lifts me off the ground
    And I am flying.


    I hit the T.V.
    I am crying; she is too.
    Again I am up.


    In the hospital.
    Mommy and Doctor argue.
    The doctor wants me.


    "You ain't gettin' her!"
    Mommy picks me up, careful.
    My cast is itchy.


    What happened after?
    How should I remember that?
    I was only four.




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