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    dots Submission Name: Love Medots
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    Author: Mythica
    ASL Info:    17/female/KY USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.79 - 11/31/16
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 737
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       I truthfully have no idea what made me think of this one. I had read a line somewhere (The first line) and the rest just came to me. I thought I would share it here.


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    dotsLove Medots
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    Love me like you love the sun, scorching the blood in my Vampire heart.

    Let your love caress me, like the full moon’s light caresses the night.

    Love me like a newborn flower opening to the sun's warmth, as I open to yur warm heart.

    Love me like the clouds in the sky, shielding me from harm.

    Let me wander in my night, but be there to help me through the dark.

    Let me live my life, but do not let me live alone.

    Love me as I love you, and never let me go.




    Submitted on 2010-02-10 12:54:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Tell me you do not really think of yourself as a vampire . Although I admit there have been times when I could truly have devoured some one's soul just to feel it wash over myself , I'm here to tell you on the neck bow up red neck I've had some real problems with similar states of enigma . Seriously no fun at all. That aside , I have read most of your submissions . with the exception of "my world " ( because its about vampires ) , and this one is no exception to the rule . You speak of spiritual sky , and mystic symbiosis , and your desire to be self made . Things I find admirable in a person of your age . Conversely for the most part this appears to be a looking for a boyfriend thing so perhaps I should leave it alone . Then again , again , a young man would have to be pretty silly not to see the simple beauties of its eloquence .
    I have commented on your works now allow me to tout my own once again . I would be pleased to have you read " Echo (ode to the Phoenix) " and tell me what you think . Its actually the first poem I ever wrote and grew out of a very deep and dark relationship I had .
    | Posted on 2010-03-03 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      When you finish reading this, please leave your comments, whether you liked it, hated it, anything.

    Thanks,

    Mythica
    | Posted on 2010-02-23 00:00:00 | by Mythica | [ Reply to This ]


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