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    dots Submission Name: Rabbit.dots
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    Author: AkuRoku
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 3/4/5
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       My latest poem.
    Sometimes people need to stop an really think.....


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    dotsRabbit.dots
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    I love how people have no hearts.

    I love how people think only of themselves.

    I love how people flock like sheep to the person with the most influence over them without caring about their cruel intentions and display favoritism and ignorance.

    I love how the people who nearly raped you still try to talk to you when you clearly do not want to be talked to.

    I love how in the face of POWER, people flee like cowards, but when one person dares to stand up in spite of consequences to put an end to tyranny or possibly negotiate, that person is shot down because the power is too tempting for the weak person wielding it.

    I love how people can give out Fuck you's just as easily as they can give out I love you's.

    I love how fake you really are.

    I love how no matter how much I try to protect my friends, I am going to be the one who gets burned in the end.

    I currently despise people and their ridiculous illogic.

    I am going to be a rabbit.




    Submitted on 2010-02-10 15:55:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "that person is shot down because the power is too tempting for the weak person wielding it. "

    To be one hundred percent honest I wrote this out of anger an can't remember much of what I was thinking that night I wrote this but from what I can remember....

    Is when someone try's to stand up for what they believe in or just stand up in general to help let others peoples voices be heard the one who has the power finds it funny that they think that they can stand up just like that. They don't enjoy the fact someone has the nerve and strength to go against them so they spit harsh things an act childish because no one had ever stood up before. So they show their weak side an the person who stood up loses their confidence an just walks away from what they were trying to stand up for.

    Why a rabbit?

    They are peaceful animals most people either adore or ignore.
    I'm not sure how I can go into explaining why I choose a rabbit but one of the reasons was because it's peaceful.

    | Posted on 2010-02-20 00:00:00 | by AkuRoku | [ Reply to This ]
      abracadabra... *POOF* yoos is a rabbit. Trying to escape the human condition? selfish people without compassion. I don't understand this part: that person is shot down because the power is too tempting for the weak person wielding it. Could you clarify. I'm just curious. I liked it. The general and true message that people are fickle pricks or at least some people anyway. Why be a rabbit?
    | Posted on 2010-02-19 00:00:00 | by thingstoforget | [ Reply to This ]


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