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a venture host divided


Author: caspian
ASL Info:    23/m/Denmark
Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 134 /189 /57
Words: 140
Class/Type: Lyrics /Misc
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a venture host divided



oh my god you´ve got a rhythm to it
if you only had some kind of riddle to it
then I could see through you like you do with me
and I could pursue you like the animal that I am

indstead i feel sedated
like a prisoner castrated
lovebound misery
like schoolyard mockery
it spreads so contagiously
and leaves me behind glass windows

oh my god Ive got a rhythm to it
the more i drink the more i lack the fluid
but now i can see through you like you do with me
and i can pursue you like the animal that you are

Instead I feel misguided
like a venture host divided
between snakes and stinging bees
like a thief feels complicity
it spreads so contagiously
and leaves me behind glass windows




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