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    dots Submission Name: Sing with medots

    Author: ellesmera
    ASL Info:    18. Female. England
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 43/263/115
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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       Writing excercise.
    Im trying to write a song, so i thought i would write a poem about writing a song. Not much too it. Lol

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    dotsSing with medots

    I've been trying to write down an amazing thing,
    Something to read and make the heart sing,
    I've been searching the world for the right words
    Down in the ground, and up with the birds.
    There doesn't seem to be the words to describe,
    The utter joy of knowing that you can survive.
    Life will throw stuff at you constantly,
    And its just a chore to live incompetantly.

    I can sing the words to many a song
    I know the rhyme so I sing along
    But when it comes down to the final crunch
    And turning out the bad of the bunch
    I cant seem to get them out right
    Every sentance is a battle, a fight.

    It will take me forever to write out this song
    But when I'm done I hope you will sing along.

    Submitted on 2010-02-10 21:43:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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