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    dots Submission Name: Acciaccatura Octavedots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsAcciaccatura Octavedots
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    Waiting for the sound
    As it bends into the air
    Silent Solfeggio inside
    The single cell outside the self
    Plucks the harp, repeats the chord
    An octave of the all

    The quiet choirs they sing so loud
    Their voices into the air
    With their music of the spheres
    But still everything gathers here
    Plucks the harp, repeats the chord
    In the octave of the all

    Listening in a single sound
    The silences resonate as it awaits
    Waiting for the day
    But the time is here they say
    Plucks the harp, repeats the chord
    With the octave of the all

    Drifting on the perch, and poised upon the leaping verge
    Creation sung on the chromatic scale
    In acciaccatura we are held
    Waiting for love to make its sound
    And through the Universe resound
    Plucks the harp, repeats the chord
    The octave of the all





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