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    dots Submission Name: Wolfenessdots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    You sit with your black howl
    And bay for comfort
    To the cold moon rise, you created
    Though your longings hung like fire on your lips

    Wolf of the steps
    You prowl the forests
    Searching for the loneliest of wordsmiths
    Another prey to fill your hunger
    Another to know your emptiness

    And if it wasn’t for the glint of danger
    In such coy eyes and subtle fur
    If it wasn’t for the chill of claws
    Hidden beneath the warmth

    If it wasn’t for the screaming agony raging in your heart
    Such a predator with pen and quill
    Could tear any mans throat
    To feed upon the spill and gush of love
    And then dine on the pain it caused her

    You sit with your black howl
    To echo through the unmapped darkness
    Lurking with the flash of your eyes
    In the chill fang of your compromise

    And he thinks himself a hunter by his own scent of blood
    And dares to enter the tricks and turns
    Of the wolf in heat forest
    He thinks he has the armour
    To stop her, from ripping out his heart

    Submitted on 2010-02-11 10:35:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Your scary , but as strange as it might wolfiness seem it leaves me with feelings of fealty . I love a woman who won't take it . It's good to know your type exist . Keep it up .
    | Posted on 2010-03-01 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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