Description: not sure. a look into my mind I just wrote down what i thought of. lol
Mental Mind Fuck -------------------------------------------
Try your hand at somthing new
everything has gotten so old
pen to paper and nothing there
backwards steps go unnoticed
and forwards just to hard to do
the world crumbles
the same old shit
you can show your kids
but your life story is not for show
write your heart out
stuck in blank dispare
damn there it goes again
just wanna hear his voice
one more time
is it over yet
he's pissed again
Write away your history... for nobody will care... Explain your days of glory... so they twist them into shame... Do whatever you need to do... it all ends up the same... Boost your ego all you want... you still are so worthless... Go back and try to fix it... it wont matter in the end... Your soul is still so fragile... just another empty shell.
holy [censored], this is amazing. The almost sing-songy flow lends itself well to the manic pace I imagine when reading it. Of course, it could be read very slowly and just, blaaaaah feeling, in which it's extraordinarily sad. The imagery is so stilted and changes so much, for some reason my first thought was of a mirror breaking into a billion pieces, and each one of those pieces shows a different reflection...if that makes sense.
If I was still in a punk/grunge band, I would steal these.