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    dots Submission Name: PLAYING GODdots
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    Author: Magger32
    ASL Info:    18-female-PA.
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 53/131/124
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsPLAYING GODdots
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    Iíll use your blood as my rivers,
    Cut your fingers off for trees,
    Your eyes would make great fish in the seas.
    Call me twisted, insane and insecure,
    My world is covered in filth and worms.
    In my mind the sky is always black,
    The moon empty and bleak,
    Love has only one companionÖ
    And thatís misery.






    Submitted on 2010-02-11 23:03:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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