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    dots Submission Name: Not Youdots
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    Author: PrincessOfDark
    ASL Info:    17/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 22/31/25
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsNot Youdots
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    No words exchanged
    Within too many days
    It kills me inside
    As the blood tears
    Roll down my cheeks
    Who will wipe them away?
    Not you
    Not anymore
    Not ever
    How can you?
    I never see you
    You never see me
    When we actually do talk
    My voice revels nothing
    Not to you,
    The love of my life,
    Not to anyone
    I love you with all my heart
    But then again
    My heart hurts
    It aches
    Everyday that passes
    What,
    Who,
    Will help yeild this pain?
    Certainly,
    Not you




    Submitted on 2010-02-11 23:09:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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