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    dots Submission Name: GAY AS SIN!!!dots
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    Author: Magger32
    ASL Info:    18-female-PA.
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 53/131/124
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 411
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 124



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    dotsGAY AS SIN!!!dots
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    I smile because Iím proud.
    I am who I am,
    If you choose to judge
    Go to hell as Jesus says I am.




    Submitted on 2010-02-11 23:37:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Jesus never said anything about gay people
    | Posted on 2010-02-13 00:00:00 | by Sethesin | [ Reply to This ]
      Sweet simple and to the point. It is bitter and understandably so, I think there could have been more to it, but I couldn't tell you what it could be. I have never really been one to draw things out.

    Just as a side note and it is completely personal and I am very sorry if I offend you:

    Just because someone believes something doesn't mean they are going to hell, It is also the same to be said for for the way we live. It is not always a choice to be who you are it is your choice to deny that gift that was given to you by, fate, God, Allah, Buddah, Vashnu, Ishtar, or any other of the thousands of other deities or supreme beings that have be worshiped through out the ages. It is their right to hate just as it is yours...But as my daddy always taught me kill em with kindness kiddo. I can understand why it is you feel the way that you do.

    I enjoyed reading it is nice to know that others think and feel similar to myself.

    Keep you chin up and remember you can embrace who you are or you can deny that is your choice.

    | Posted on 2010-02-12 00:00:00 | by Raye | [ Reply to This ]


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