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    dots Submission Name: THE LAST SUNRISEdots

    Author: DAlin
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    dotsTHE LAST SUNRISEdots


    Here I am
    You can see the tears I`ve cried
    All the pain I felt inside
    Can you see it in my eyes
    The last sunrise.

    Hold my hand
    And you`ll never be afraid
    Close your eyes
    And you will never have to wait
    Can you hear the sound of love
    Coming from above.

    R. The sun is shining one last time
    For me and you again
    Birds are singing in the sky
    For you and I.

    Fly with me
    Smile and feel the harmony
    Into the meadows of eternity
    Can you see it in my eyes
    The last sunrise.

    I found a world
    Where we can be alone
    A fairytale for us
    Remember, it`s the last sunrise.

    R. The sun is shining one last time
    For me and you again
    Birds are singing in the sky
    For you and I.

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