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    dots Submission Name: Strange Worlddots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 353
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsStrange Worlddots
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    Dragged out on the barbed wire
    Dragged out on my mind
    Turning the pointed fingers in
    Into the talons of my mind
    Feeling how my eyes could burn
    From everything Iíve seen

    If itís the colours of your blood
    Then its everything youíre thinking of

    Born out into a trash can
    Slung into the pain
    A child of music song and dance
    Who never stood a chance
    Raped inside the back streets, back streets of your mind
    And everything you had to learn
    Youíll have to do again
    Youíll have to learn again

    If itís the colour of your blood

    And in the twist you speak divine
    Youíre falsehood on the shit sublime
    To eager to believe
    You always will believe

    And if itís the colour of your blood
    Then itís everything I am thinking of

    Strange days you fall inside
    You fall inside my mind
    Walking with your holy light
    Walking right through my mind
    You burn inside the tear drops
    You eat inside the dungeons
    You eat, eat inside the past

    Crawling on the battlefields
    The barbed wire of my mind
    The stories of misfortunes
    The legends of our time
    All the vengeance we behold
    In the colours of our blood

    The love inside you ripped apart
    And in the twist you speak divine
    Youíre falsehood on the shit sublime
    To eager to believe
    You always will believe

    Strange world you fall inside
    You fall into my mind
    Your torch is not the holy light
    Your truth is not mine
    Burning inside the lies
    The dungeons of your past
    Raped inside the back streets, back streets of your mind

    And if itís the colour of your blood
    Then itís you Iím thinking of
    Running on your mouse wheel
    Twisting on what you think sublime
    Upon the walls you think are mine
    A falsehood made of shit
    Define your world by this

    To eager to believe
    You always will believe
    And if itís the colour of your blood
    Then itís everything I am thinking of






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      i can kinda see the blood mind association but really dude or dudette a poem or lyrical rhythm and the undertone of ... control over the reader is worthless, no good... i think the you and i dynamic is responsible for your error...ha even simple suggestion would show you a fraud... does that sound like something that is poetic... no it sounds angry or maybe jealous...and esoteric agreement is a people pleaser attitude .
    | Posted on 2010-02-13 00:00:00 | by leocrates | [ Reply to This ]


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