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    dots Submission Name: Fast Greyhounddots
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    Author: leocrates
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 103/34/38
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 360
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1031



    Description:
       mental masturbation is just a wash so if i said i wanted this to be post modern expressionist why would i go on a digression into the perversion of sexism, to drain the Lizard ?King? the greater game calls and there can only be the expressed depression of change...


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    dotsFast Greyhounddots
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    washed, in the symbolism
    of a crescent caught before a star.

    in the throws of the beaches
    landlocked spire...
    the tides of oblivion, a magnate,
    a magistrate,
    of time.

    Whimsy for vagrancy
    soul in the face of rebellion
    a glaring flaw in concrete sidewalks
    the city of the distant...
    the city of wobbling up...
    the city of the massive reflection...

    in the cold of late year
    yet early death
    of Hade’s want for Persephone
    ritual suicide,
    black mass,
    the rights of spring,
    the lies of time,

    woe to the frauds and set ups...
    the set up,
    Nihilism and real life
    dreams like forever unproven,

    the last remaining shiver of the moon,
    balance more than the gravity of air,
    strength more than the death of ideas.

    war ships in the harbor,
    docks are on strike.
    the ten dollar prayer...




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