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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 413
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 958



    Description:
       My attempt to change structure from rhyme to similarity.


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    I scream out into the crying sky
    Someone make this better now
    No response comes with time
    I helplessly await a sign

    There is no light between the clouds
    No holy sound to guide
    Only sounds of rain on ground
    And a shred of hope of mine

    And I'm shaking, cold in a lonely place
    Staring into the void of night
    Only dreams of what was close
    All of which has died

    And thunder drowns the sobs
    And my tears melt with the rain
    And I care not to look for cover
    Because it would not change a thing

    I hardly notice the storm anyway
    I could sink with eyes sealed shut
    Without a flinch due to deadening
    Avalanche that starts with love

    And there is no change here
    This cold is cold and wet stays wet
    All things are passed by with time
    Nothing alive but not all is dead




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