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Submission Name:
Silver spoon Keyhole
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Author:
poppi
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7.47 - 72/55/37
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72
Class/Type:
Poetry/Misc
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It's not finished so any thoughts would be great
Silver spoon Keyhole
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Look through a silver spoon keyhole
And find
The vintage of our lives
Aged to perfection
Antiqued beauty
Are stories only whispered
Little blackbird,
Flown away
Just when I needed you most
Pioneer a new freedom
Upon fading lace
Butterfly kisses will make it crumble
This vintage is so fragile
Our memories so porous
A vintage life
Is one
Seen from aged, knowing eyes
Submitted on 2010-02-14 20:55:55
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This is Very Interesting.
| Posted on 2010-02-20 00:00:00 | by
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Ah! I loved this write. Very interesting, very interesting.
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