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Submission Name: Silver spoon Keyhole dots

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Author:	poppi
Elite Ratio:	7.47 - 72/55/37
Words:	72

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Average Vote:	5.0000
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Silver spoon Keyhole dots

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Look through a silver spoon keyhole
And find
The vintage of our lives

Aged to perfection
Antiqued beauty
Are stories only whispered

Little blackbird,
Flown away
Just when I needed you most

Pioneer a new freedom
Upon fading lace
Butterfly kisses will make it crumble

This vintage is so fragile
Our memories so porous

A vintage life
Is one
Seen from aged, knowing eyes

Submitted on 2010-02-14 20:55:55 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This is Very Interesting.
| Posted on 2010-02-20 00:00:00 | by AcidCOKE | [ Reply to This ]
Ah! I loved this write. Very interesting, very interesting.
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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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