Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Silver spoon Keyholedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: poppi
    Elite Ratio:    7.47 - 72/55/37
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 657
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 528



    Description:
       It's not finished so any thoughts would be great


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSilver spoon Keyholedots
    -------------------------------------------


    Look through a silver spoon keyhole
    And find
    The vintage of our lives

    Aged to perfection
    Antiqued beauty
    Are stories only whispered

    Little blackbird,
    Flown away
    Just when I needed you most

    Pioneer a new freedom
    Upon fading lace
    Butterfly kisses will make it crumble

    This vintage is so fragile
    Our memories so porous

    A vintage life
    Is one
    Seen from aged, knowing eyes




    Submitted on 2010-02-14 20:55:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      This is Very Interesting.
    | Posted on 2010-02-20 00:00:00 | by AcidCOKE | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah! I loved this write. Very interesting, very interesting.
    :]
    | Posted on 2010-02-16 00:00:00 | by xxiknownowxx | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    182961

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    Snippet written by Daniel Barlow
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    A Thousand Reflections written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    The Abyss of Love written by poetotoe
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    untitled written by Outlaw
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Keep written by TheStillSilence
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry