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    dots Submission Name: I Am Brilliancedots
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    Author: Drea
    ASL Info:    18/f/nowhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 289/142/53
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 490
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1188



    Description:
       So...I've been listening to a lot of Natalie Stewart lately (if you don't know who she is OMG look her up! Freaking brilliant!) and I decided I wanted to write some speakeasy poetry. I don't think it's quite as good reading it as it is hearing ME read it but still, i'm posting it so...yeah. Here ya go :)


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    dotsI Am Brilliancedots
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    You've never met anyone as brilliant as me.
    A star shining so bright, I trigger epilepsy.
    See-Be-Me...You CANT!
    I float like a butterfly sting like a bee
    Roots thick as a trees
    Haunting your dreams
    In EVERY Fantasy
    An ever-so-present memory...
    From me you CANNOT flee.

    Flee or Be Free,
    Free ME?

    I represent the freedom of expression
    Unconcerned with the aspect of acceptation,
    I fear no rejection!
    Recession is just a matter of perception,
    Regression NEEDS acceptance!
    And I wont give in...

    Then.

    I told you I was brilliant.
    My shoulders, like boulders remain unmoved
    Though the weight of the world leaves me tattered and bruised
    I'll stay true.

    True to my cause
    True to my thoughts
    FLAUNTING my flaws,
    I'll hold my head high.

    I'll walk with pride
    REFUSING to hide
    the dignity IN-side,

    My heart, AND my mind.

    The very being of my existence
    Andrea Monique Keeton
    I AM BRILLIANCE...




    Submitted on 2010-02-15 10:43:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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