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Break up


Author: fishoutofwater
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Words: 45
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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dont remember when i wrote this one.


Break up



I am strong
I can do this on my own
You are weak
And cant be alone
We were one
But now we are done
I gave you a try
But you just lied
I gave you up
Cause you became a butt




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