Sign up to EliteSkills

Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

Hello, Goodbye

Author: fishoutofwater
Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0 /1 /3
Words: 30
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
Total Views: 642
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 217


wrote this doing mediation writing

Hello, Goodbye

Hello, Goodbye
That’s all there is
One place, too long
It’s time to go
Follow your heart
No that ain’t right
It’s follow your nose
And taste the rainbow

Submitted on 2010-02-15 11:14:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!


  No, its about how i cant stay in one place to long, its short, and i never follow my heart, always leads me into trouble.

Thought i was cute when i wrote it, so kept it
| Posted on 2010-03-02 00:00:00 | by fishoutofwater | [ Reply to This ]
  is this bout a homosexual couple?
| Posted on 2010-02-19 00:00:00 | by 9timesaidiloveu | [ Reply to This ]

Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?