Hello, Goodbye

Author: fishoutofwater Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0 /1 /3 Words: 30

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Hello, Goodbye

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Hello, Goodbye That’s all there is One place, too long It’s time to go Follow your heart No that ain’t right It’s follow your nose And taste the rainbow

Submitted on 2010-02-15 11:14:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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No, its about how i cant stay in one place to long, its short, and i never follow my heart, always leads me into trouble. Thought i was cute when i wrote it, so kept it

| Posted on 2010-03-02 00:00:00 | by fishoutofwater | [ Reply to This ]

is this bout a homosexual couple?

| Posted on 2010-02-19 00:00:00 | by 9timesaidiloveu | [ Reply to This ]

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