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    dots Submission Name: Moonlight Bathdots
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    Author: AcidCOKE
    ASL Info:    229/HeShe/RainbowCity
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 3/4/5
    Words: 211
    Class/Type: Story/Love
    Total Views: 952
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1340



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    dotsMoonlight Bathdots
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    Water trickling down her spine.
    Her hair running down the front of her body.
    The Moonlight shinned upon her.
    Her white skin glowing.
    She then questioned the Moon.
    'Why do you shine upon me, and everything else?'
    Looking up at the silky Moon.
    It then answered back,
    'I do, because I adore your kind.'
    A the girl had then walked out of the water, the moonlight only showed her.
    'Then why don't you take me? We could be together forever.'
    Asking the Moon, it had then thought about it.
    'Marry me, tomorrow night.'

    The next day, the girl had then headed to the lake once more.
    In surprise the Moon was waiting for her again.
    'I am here Moon. Take me away..'
    Ask the Moon had lent her a hand.
    The girl loved the moon, and so did it.
    Being up with the Moon forever shows how much you love it.
    I guess this girl loved it more than ever.

    True love is someone who will be there forever.
    Always stay by our side.
    Stick up for her.
    Say I love you, meaning it.
    Kiss you on the cheek when you wake up.
    Do everything with you, and say to there friends.
    'I'm sorry, taking my girl out.'




    Submitted on 2010-02-15 15:44:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it, though you must add a bit more passion in it.
    | Posted on 2010-03-06 00:00:00 | by InepticVirtozou | [ Reply to This ]


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