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    dots Submission Name: Un-walkeddots

    Author: CopperVeins
    ASL Info:    16/f/ A place unknown
    Elite Ratio:    4.29 - 4/6/5
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       ^_^ Just a moment of pure thought . .

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    The roads we walk in life are well worn.
    Our ways always illuminated.
    But the people we encounter,
    The ones who stand along our roads,
    and push us when needed. . .

    Those we walk with for support,
    or too support.
    It's those people,
    Because of how they shape us.

    That is what makes our paths

    Submitted on 2010-02-15 19:30:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I didn't quite understand this...but that could be just because I have a bad migrane and am really sick. But it is very interesting.

    Could you please explain exactly what you meant by this write?

    | Posted on 2010-02-16 00:00:00 | by xxiknownowxx | [ Reply to This ]

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