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    dots Submission Name: Am I Worth More?dots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/806/391
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
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    dotsAm I Worth More?dots
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    Am I worth more than just a piece of meat
    am I worth more that I have totaled
    worth more than I could imagine
    or just worth nothing more than I could hold

    You made me feel like this
    you made me feel like I wasn't worth a dime
    and that wasn't the sad part
    but was is that I believed every single lie

    I feel so dirty I don't think I could ever be cleaned
    I am now tainted down to the core
    now i am just like you I swallowed your pity
    and now got me thinking am I worth more?




    Submitted on 2010-02-15 21:50:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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