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    dots Submission Name: ode to an olympic spirit...dots
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    Author: leocrates
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 103/34/38
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    Description:
       not really an ode more a tribute to the dedication of the -10 winter games... go America


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    dotsode to an olympic spirit...dots
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    georgia, the land of treasure,,,
    Vancouver is yours for the taking... like beachfront property and global games of risk...
    ha ... what sport...
    the theory dear knight of the ice... is a game of many dynamic facets, do not lose... melt... and return...
    georgia the dreary, the grey dawn...
    georgia the weeping, there is water in ice...
    georgia the world is burning mourn...
    show the spirit of mourning...
    the grey mire of sadness
    the burn
    yours of the spirit of Olympia is art...
    yours of the spirit of Olympia is coal-oil
    yours of the spirit of Olympia is Light...
    the snow
    the white scream of water
    snow
    the whisper of cold
    snow the shadow of nothing
    snow the flake of life
    snow the sharp white death...
    snow the breath melted
    snow the ice seed
    snow the winter
    snow the ignorance of bliss




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