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    dots Submission Name: You Stood Theredots
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    Author: AshKetchumLuv
    ASL Info:    17/Ladeh/Nonyabeezwax
    Elite Ratio:    6.63 - 14/15/12
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
    Total Views: 643
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 572



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    dotsYou Stood Theredots
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    You heard the glock,
    and you stood there.


    You heard me whimpering,
    and you stood there.


    You heard us shaking,
    and you stood there.


    You heard him yelling,
    and you stood there.


    You heard the accusations,
    and you stood there.


    You heard the slamming,
    and you stood there.


    You selfish bitch,
    you just stood there.


    I fucking hate you.
    And you still stand there.




    Submitted on 2010-02-17 07:17:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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