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    dots Submission Name: Robot Headdots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsRobot Headdots
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    Every get that feeling
    Like
    The closer you get to something
    The further away it seems.....

    Is it the ego
    This little mind
    Working major amounts of overtime
    Trying desperately to protect itself and convince itself
    That it is right and the best thing........
    For us both

    Same old game plan for the robot head
    Looking for ways to drag you down
    Or build you up
    And trip you up
    Turn you around
    And then fuck it up

    Are you getting enough

    Itís a comical little mind set
    And a tyrannical little comedian
    Always plying itself for more and more of the same thing
    Even if itís shit
    It must be good
    Because little despot ego is getting plenty of it

    Happy little moron
    As it feeds habitually on your lack
    And your worth have
    And is never satisfied with what you do
    Have

    And in its fiend cornucopia of self misery
    And its self-satisfied obesity
    Lead you around by the nose
    Every get that feeling
    Like
    The closer you get to something
    The further away it seems.....

    Its under attack
    And its worst fear is
    It cannot stop your heart




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      philosophy is not psychiatry psychiatry detracts from philosophy... it is the same thing religion tried to do to philosophy... only some retard named Freud who loves his birth giver so much he is locked in the lost and forgotten realms of such aether as love and condition, we do condition ourselves and i prefer that poetry is better without syco dapple and you might find broad horizons in books of fundamental philosophy... think ancient, or especially accredited, remember modern has no cred... in the street... oh and freud was a phallustician how's pete...
    | Posted on 2010-02-18 00:00:00 | by leocrates | [ Reply to This ]


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