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    dots Submission Name: A Strange Alchemydots
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    Author: catechism42
    ASL Info:    31 / M / Pasadena, TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 5/18/33
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 719
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    Bytes: 204



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       No, it isn't supposed to make sense at all, it's just a combination of sounds.


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    dotsA Strange Alchemydots
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    Lo, whence did Thrice Great Hermes fall ingto the sea of which your dawn of seasons fill to brim the rising sail leeforth wherein least bespoke chrubim wisdoms catch a-cusp the winter's mourning dew.




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