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    dots Submission Name: A Sudden Feelingdots
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    Author: catechism42
    ASL Info:    31 / M / Pasadena, TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 5/18/33
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA Sudden Feelingdots
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    Sherblah, fitzniggit, wubangk! Ock! Firrum, ferrum, forum, form. Danjai! Ah-hah! It is the season from which come creepy crawly scatterbugs traipsing 'cross canopies of bright green leaves to sieze the golden glory. Weather well misgivings lest they end thee and thy tender ministrations.




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