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    dots Submission Name: Infinite Vastnessdots
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    Author: catechism42
    ASL Info:    31 / M / Pasadena, TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 5/18/33
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsInfinite Vastnessdots
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    Silently being infinite vastness
    Ripple of movement echoing dream
    Song of memory outside time
    Ephemeral river dawning form

    Eyeless spiraling void yet can see
    Trapped outside itsself in occlusion
    Strands of transcendant melody
    Spindling across the fiery ocean




    Submitted on 2010-02-17 17:14:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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